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Momma
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 5:41 pm
Many thanks y'all..  ..Glad you liked it Bubba...  ..It took me AGES to find that photo...
Right Batty..this weeks theme.... Daydreaming.........Something everyone will have done I reckon..
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NomadofLuna
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:29 pm
A Dream In Blue
The corner casts a shadow
and I let my heavy lids fall
In the middle of a work-day
I have no right at all
to sleep
So I stay awake
just resting the eye
and I drift to another place
as far and blue as the sky
Blue is cool
Blue is deep
Friendly
and
Playfull
So, I will just play a while
Be in a cool blue place a while
Be friendly until I hear the footsteps
The Red menace of my superviser
She's hot,
And not in the good way
She should cool down
Like me
Be more blue
But that might make her purple
Howdy Y'all.
Last edited by NomadofLuna on Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:49 am; edited 1 time in total
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:51 pm
Fantastic theme, I'm famous for it!! LOL
Buses brings me out in a daydream
A journey long to and from my home
In a small village outside a town
Sometimes I catch people looking me with a frown
Turns out a small smile escaped me
As I think of something funny
Sometimes I wish I didn't do it often enough
As I tend to miss where I should be getting off!
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He comes alive and ever so real
I can almost smell let alone feel
The presence of his all being
In my minds eye I am all seeing
We make love once more
Just before he went through the door
To another world after he died
Memories fade despite how I tried
Fought, battled, talked and scream
Too keep him alive albeit in a daydream
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Momma
BoT's Momma

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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 9:18 pm
Fantastic start Nomad and Batty...
Nomad..Nomad..where have you been..
You been to London to see the queen ?
Brilliant to see you back posting....
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Juno54
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:15 am
Darn, responded the other day to you Momma but my 'puter went loopy & it didn't post. No point now as would be so out of context in the new thread. Oh well. Have fun!!
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DREAMY FOOD
Body in need of sustenance
thoughtless snack embraced
but truely the effect is reversed
Feels like squiggly lines and balloons
these colours that fall on a
moon turning inside out
Forgotten rhymes, remembered
as allegories...shaddows
on invisible faces
Transfixed the cockerel climb
into a basket marked "limbo"
while their whistles turn to stone
These induced daydreams
so innocently taken on, shocked me,
that mushroom must've been MAGIC!!
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We're a posse of poets who meet online
and ecourage eachother to daydream, sometimes putting these to rhyme.
Though that wasn't very good it's creativity that matters
in our world of expression, make believe and mindless chatter.
(edit to move smiley)
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Momma
BoT's Momma

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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:55 am
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NightLighter
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:04 am
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:57 am
Legos of daydream
Imagination running free
In their eyes they see
One on top of another
A house, car, bus or whatever
Stacked high
Reaching for the sky
Visions promote creativity
Legos of daydream becoming reality
I sit and watch with a smile
It's going to be a long while
Before they get bored with it
The legos that can get daydream built
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NomadofLuna
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:29 pm
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Momma
BoT's Momma

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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 9:33 pm
Nah !..You wouldn't want to meet ole Lizzie anyways..can't imagine her being a barrel of laughs...
How is Sofia..she must be..what ?...almost 2yrs old ?....
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NightLighter
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 2:56 am
BattyOldMaid wrote:Legos of daydream
Imagination running free
In their eyes they see
One on top of another
A house, car, bus or whatever
Stacked high
Reaching for the sky
Visions promote creativity
Legos of daydream becoming reality
I sit and watch with a smile
It's going to be a long while
Before they get bored with it
The legos that can get daydream built
Excellent poem, Batty! Nothing compares to the creativity of young children & you captured that so well in your poem - Blessings, NL
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Juno54
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 4:17 am
In the garden, in sunshine with kitty by my side
I listen to wind chimes and while away my time
Colours swirling around in my head,
become a butterfly and I it's passenger
We swoop down to kitty, dodging her paw,
then higher we fly to dance around the jasmine
Here we land on a branch overhead
to find hidden creatures in the boughs
Just when I'm feeling how nice playtime is
THE TELEPHONE RINGS and yanks me back to earth
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Juno54
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:57 pm
What does your pet daydream about?
Does your kelpie chase cars when he looks at the stars
with twin satellites for the tail lights?
Does your burmese catch fish from the pond
and a-tickling her whiskers is a curly fern frond?
What do you daydream about?
Do you envision a romantic weekend...
there in your arms is your lover, your friend?
Do you tell the boss you quit...
or charm them with verve and wit?
If you're not one for pretend & keep imagination under lid,
I tell you now & true, you're really missing something kid!!
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Newbs
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:43 pm
I could never understand why
the teachers would tell you
to stop daydreaming , and then ask you to use your imagination?
I could never understand too
why it was frowned upon at work to daydream and ponder ,
yet new ideas and initiative were the required products
I now think that given time
through meditation and calm thought
We come up with our own little light bulbs ideas , to find our own path , and call it enlightenment
For it could be that the powers
that control and try to drive our car of life
Need us to think in only their straight line and not map out our own.. how wrong !
Book of Thoth gives everyone the chance
To spend time in study and contemplation
And in developing their points of concern by being open minded and aware
Some of the blank face robots
That follow like sheep to the slaughter truck
Would call it Daydreaming , I call it gathering information for personal discovery.
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Newbs
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:21 pm
Daydreaming
On the empty beach , her footsteps grace
leaving slight and tiny footstep marks
before the tide removes each trace
She sings of love, of men sailing free
Lilting melody and soulful tunes
of the spoils of fights held out at sea
She walks right by, her gown deep blue
Stepping carefully in shoeless feet
She has no sight of me , she looks straight through
Is she a dream ? a flicker of a time ?
As I sit and watch her walk into the sea
I hope that the girl is just a dream of mine
For I cannot save, I'm too far away
She will sink beneath , will be lost in the foam
Her body will be gone , though she will live on for another day
For the sea can soothe , can cleanse and heal
The pain of love , of chances lost in the flow of life
And I will daydream , and see the sights and feel the feel.
For I am her , and she now is me
Our thoughts , and lives , and memories entwine
So she now sits and watches me walk , slowly , into the sea
_________________ Live your life in such a way that when your feet touch the floor in the morning
Satan shudders & says 'Oh **!@%.....she's awake!!! '
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Momma
BoT's Momma

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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:38 pm
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The wind is cool..fresh..and strong..
As it gathers me up..
And sweeps me along..
I know not where to..only it can decide
Content in its power..
My time can bide..
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NightLighter
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:46 pm
Newbs wrote:Daydreaming
On the empty beach , her footsteps grace
leaving slight and tiny footstep marks
before the tide removes each trace
She sings of love, of men sailing free
Lilting melody and soulful tunes
of the spoils of fights held out at sea
She walks right by, her gown deep blue
Stepping carefully in shoeless feet
She has no sight of me , she looks straight through
Is she a dream ? a flicker of a time ?
As I sit and watch her walk into the sea
I hope that the girl is just a dream of mine
For I cannot save, I'm too far away
She will sink beneath , will be lost in the foam
Her body will be gone , though she will live on for another day
For the sea can soothe , can cleanse and heal
The pain of love , of chances lost in the flow of life
And I will daydream , and see the sights and feel the feel.
For I am her , and she now is me
Our thoughts , and lives , and memories entwine
So she now sits and watches me walk , slowly , into the sea
Newbs, This is nothing short of pure excellence! All I can say is- WoW, IMHO this is you at your very best , Kudos, NL
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aussiET
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:46 am
NEWBS...I 2nd NL's thoughts in that...well done but do come back down to earth
Juno...like your garden daydream very calming and visually charming...like watching a kleenex advt...nice
NomadofLuna...the escape at the moment gives character...rythm is swaying and fall...cool
Batty...the bus trip was good short but relative (very charming and innocent)
...the 2nd (too much day soap opera)...gets a bit hot under the collar...but how descriptive in small words impressive
Momma...very short but has depth...very nice to read in few seconds
cheers
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Newbs
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:12 am
 Nightlighter , from you thats an honour , AussiET too.... shucks
Nomad set the standard , It was so fab to read .... and Batty and Juno , Momma too are all so impressive so far ........ but thats the beauty of this thread , styles are different but so so so enjoyable !
_________________ Live your life in such a way that when your feet touch the floor in the morning
Satan shudders & says 'Oh **!@%.....she's awake!!! '
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Momma
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:00 pm
Well.as usual it has been tough to choose here..so many great..different themes..but the one that made me smile the most..was that of the children..and their imaginative..wonderful dreams..so this weeks winner is....
..Batty !....with her evocative poem of...
Legos of daydream
Imagination running free
In their eyes they see
One on top of another
A house, car, bus or whatever
Stacked high
Reaching for the sky
Visions promote creativity
Legos of daydream becoming reality
I sit and watch with a smile
It's going to be a long while
Before they get bored with it
The legos that can get daydream built
Well Done....
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NightLighter
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 2:00 am
Alright Batty! Great Pick, Momma,
looking forward to the new topic...Blessings, NL
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 8:22 pm
Thank you Momma.
This weeks theme
HYPOCRISY
Batty
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minifang
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 8:36 pm
hypocrisy
there is a man named al gore
he made a movie; caused an uproar
he wants everyone green
to protect the environment it seems
while he burns enough monthly energy
to power the average person for a year with synergy
all to sell his carbon credits galore
groan
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14% of people know that.
never attribute to conspiracy that which can amply be attributed to the actions of a bunch of greedy stupid self serving men in power
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:08 pm
Tell me one thing
But do the other
Give me an ear bashing
And a wagging finger
Others do the same
Albeit a different route
I see it over a period of time
I get vexed and annoyed
You single me out
But not the others
It’s me you throw a hissy fit at
And show me the angers
I tell you something
You’re a hypocrite
Two faced little nothing
A bitch all right.
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:10 pm
Cool, a stampede....hmm, maybe if my name was Momma, Newbs or Bubba?
Never mind, the winner by an outstanding margin..............MINIFANG, for his contribution. I agree with your submission though I have to say all politicians in the land are hypocrites one way or the other. It is never for anyone's benefit, just as long as they pockets are always full, that is all that matters.
So Minifang, take it away, the next theme is............?
Batty
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minifang
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:23 pm
new theme is space (however you wish to define that).
_________________ statistics can be used to prove anything
14% of people know that.
never attribute to conspiracy that which can amply be attributed to the actions of a bunch of greedy stupid self serving men in power
yes i can read minds. yours is blank most days..
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:43 pm
Keep me happy gimme space
Cramp and trap me I frown my face
Space to me is the whole wide world
Not arms length or distance of words
In fact universal space is what I crave
To keep me happy it’s all you need to give.
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BattyOldMaid
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:57 am
Space, the final frontier.
Growing up in awe of Star Trek series
Following those travels and the encounter
Vast differences captivated us
Kids whose intellect needed counter
For imagination to run with thesis
What if, what should and which answer
Star Trek enabled us to suppose and sense
Whether or not Space, is the final frontier.
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Newbs
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:32 pm
Catching up on various threads... on my return from two weeks away....
Hmm
this ones still got me thinking ... I'll sure be back tho' !
_________________ Live your life in such a way that when your feet touch the floor in the morning
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Momma
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:00 pm
Empty Space
In the space of a moment..
A world..upside down..
Yet no clocks had stopped..
And the world….
Still turned round.
Empty space..empty mind..
Rational thoughts..
Hard to find.
But spaces are filled..
With different things..
Love soon returns..
And the heart again sings.
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